东莞英凯教育(环球雅思分校)
清北学霸雅思写作能考几分?
- 2019年8月29日
- 文章来自: dgukedu
- 分类: 雅思备考
常有考生问:雅思写作7分难拿吗?来,咱们看看雅思官方发布的2018年白皮书。看到清华、北大的学霸们写作平均分通通不到6,你是不是就放心了。到底怎么遣词造句才能写出满足7分要求的句子呢?咱们用雅思考官高分范文来学学7+的句子长什么样。 以下这段范文论述的是从小学阶段(相比于中学)开始学外语的好处。从语法结构上来说,每句话都有可圈可点之处。“An obvious argument in its favour is that young children pick up languages much more easily than teenagers. Their brains are still programmed to acquire their mother tongue, which facilitates learning another language, and unlike adolescents, they are not inhibited by self-consciousness.”
1. 表语从句
An obvious argument in its favour is that young children pick up languages much more easily than teenagers. 意思是:支持这一观点的论据是儿童比青少年更容易学习外语。表语从句是名词性从句的一种(其他的几类名词性从句我们在小班课上会讲到,通通好用又加分)。上面的句子主干是it is + 从句。因为从句是处于表语位置,所以称之为表语从句。来看几个例子:The suggestion is that the government should help to protect the environment. The question is how we can learn foreign languages efficiently.
2. 非限定性定语从句
Their brains are still programmed to acquire their mother tongue, which facilitates learning another language. 意思是他们的大脑仍在学习母语,这对学习另一外语有促进作用。这句话中which引导的非限定性定语从句修饰/指代的是前面的一整句话,在写作中能使前后2句话联系更紧密,意思是前面的内容对which后面的内容造成了好/坏的影响。例如:When learning in small classes, students are able to stay focused, which is conducive to their language learning. 在小班学习的时候,学生可以集中注意力,这对他们的语言学习有好处。(顺便打个广告,写作小班课周日开课。小班课的学习效果比大班课好的可不是一丢丢哦)。
3. 介宾短语用法
Unlike adolescents, they are not inhibited by self-consciousness. 意思是:与青少年相比,他们还没有被自我意识所阻碍。Unlike sth, ….是介宾短语前置的用法,事实上,这只是一个简单句的变形,用了unlike sth 放在句子前面可以突出对比的对象。类似的用法还有:By/Through引起的方式状语:By/through participating in outdoor activities, students are able to get in touch with the outside world. (突出具体使用的方式、方法:通过参加户外运动的机会,学生能接触到外界世界。)with引导的独立主格结构:With the opportunities to participate in outdoor activities, students are able to get in touch with the outside world. (突出具体的条件:有参加户外运动的机会,学生能接触到外界世界。)以下这段范文紧接着上段范文,语法结构也有可效仿之处:“The greater flexibility of the primary timetable allows for more frequent, shorter sessions and for a play-centred approach, thus maintaining learners’ enthusiasm and progress. Their command of the language in later life will benefit from this early exposure, while learning other languages subsequently will be easier for them. They may also gain a better understanding of other cultures.”
4. 伴随状语从句
The greater flexibility of the primary timetable allows for more frequent, shorter sessions and for a play-centred approach, thus maintaining learners’ enthusiasm and progress. 意思是:小学更加灵活的时间安排可以上更短、更频繁的课程,并且也可以采取以寓教于乐的教学方式,因此可以维持学习者的热情和进步。 以上句子加粗部分是伴随状语从句,其实是状语从句的一种,但是更突出强调前后的动作是同步产生的。在这里,突出强调前后动作是有因果关系的。例如:Taking a part-time job means students need to spend time in doing things that are not related to study, therefore making it difficult for them to achieve good scores in their academic subjects.以下这段范文探讨的是先天因素还是后天因素对我们的生活影响大。大家可以重点看一下最后加粗部分:My own view is that there is no one major influence in a person’s life. Instead, the traits we inherit from our parents and the situations and experiences that we encounter in life are constantly interacting. It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person’s personality and dictates how that personality develops. If this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behavior and character of a person from the moment they were born.
5. 强调句
It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person’s personality and dictates how that personality develops. 这是一句典型的强调句(又叫分裂句)这里强调出来是先天的因素和后面的因素两者相互作用形成了人的性格,并且决定性格会如何发展变化。强调句的句型结构是: it is … that …。例如: It is parents who should take good care of their children. 这里其实就是突出强调了parents。强调说明就是父母应该照看好他们的孩子。It is the price of petrol that makes people decide to stop driving their private cars. 这里突出强调汽油价格。强调说明就是汽油价格让人们决定不开私家车了。
6. 虚拟语气
If this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behavior and character of a person from the moment they were born. 这里是对现在情况的虚拟,意思是:如果这不是对的(性格不是先天+后天因素导致的话),那人一出生我们就可以判定ta的行为和性格了。其实这里也是一种对比强调的语气。强调出来,作者前面所说的内容是真的。例如:If it were not for airplanes, we would not be able to travel around the world easily. 意思是,要不是飞机,环球旅行对于我们来说就没那么容易了。这里强调的是飞机的重要性。 Summary
长句的语法并不是那么的深不可测,其实很多时候都是在基础句型上的重新组合。只要大家能在考试中准确使用以上的改良简单句和复杂句,要想体现语法的多样性也就不难了。 关于考官范文,有一点要特别提一下,考官范文的思路和写法有比较大的随意性,模仿起来可能显得无章可循,但是范文中,地道的语言表达非常值得学习的,大家不妨当做语言素材学习一下。